इस झूठ को सच मान डाला है
की दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ |
ये शब्दों की व्यथा भी देखे
सच और झूठ एक ही पंक्ति में
देखना तो बस नजरिया है
दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ |
रावण ने सीता हरण किया, अंहकार
राम ने वध किया, महिमा अपरम्पार
हरण या हत्या?
दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ|
कौरवो का राज, पाप
पांडवो का कपट, साफ़
द्रौपदी पे दांव, या उस दांव का मान?
दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ|
प्रतिदिन इस जीवन में
भावुकता देती हमारे मन को सींच
तर्क वितर्क तिरस्कार अलंकार
प्रेम घृणा को करते भींच
चल देते राह पे ये कहके,
दुनिया बुरी है,
मै भला हूँ|
न जाने कितनो का ह्रदय तोडे
कितनो का किया अपमान
सोचा नहीं, निशा और किरण का सम्बन्ध
मेघा और वर्षा में अंतर
बस, दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ|
झूठ ही सच है, और सच भी झूठ
जाने ये हम कब मानेंगे
की, हालात पहलु है, और हम नज़रिया
तब तक, दुनिया बुरी है
मै भला हूँ|
--राजीव रं. की रचना
21 comments:
Very apt title for a poem like this...
I think everyone thinks the same...
Problem is, they think thier view is right and when they commit the same mistake, they dont judge it in the same way as they did in case of others..
Raavan ne to seeta ko chua bhi nahi tha, aur use marne ka mu dekhna pada...
pandavas ne bhi bahut se kapat kiye,jise sabhi "jang mein sab chalta hai ka naam de dete" and ignore it..
Very nice attempt rajeev....
apart from examples which i liked, your last two stanza's are very good...
perception!!!!!!
evrythin changes with this one word..:) its always the poor me..the victimised me..the why me...superb poem..u take me back to hindi poems must thank u for it:)
have a great week..
divsi
@Mahesh
hehe thanx for the goodie-goodie words. thank you thank you
@ Divsi
We have marginalised Hindi to the wall. Do we read, or even see a good quality Hindi Novel...? I am an English Literature student! lol
anyways...thanx for viewing....and for the kind words
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'divish' had rightly said that is 'PERCEPTION' that differentiate the views of different person on the same action....
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main thing which matters is the environment in which they are living even their perception or way of thinking comes out of that.....
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the facts which you have taken of ram n ravan...and kauravs and pandavas... all have their own aspects and different aspects gives different views.....
hehe.... you must be thinking what i m trying to say......lol....
i totally agree with your thought .... every action has its own pros and cons but we only see what we want to see ..... hehe.....
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i think is its too much from my part as u know i never write too much except in UPTU copies....lol..
Dude,
i see a comment being deleted which was written by you.. why?
Anyways i left a comment for you and divsi at third gender in my blog..
In reply to your comment there..
you mean to say, its better if we right a story on a non-philosophical track?? Please clear it a little..
I have lots of story lines but the time factor postpones them..
dear rahul.......
divish???:O;):O direct gender change??????lol
@ Rahul...
Chalo UPTU ke alawa bhi kucch padhe to isi bahane...
Aur btw...DIVISH...??? :-O
Go and see an ophthalmologist...This is what Engineering does to a sane person!
:-P
And thanx for reading....and writing that too 10 lines....
@ Mahesh
didnt delete any...
@Prachi
hehe....I replied to your comment....@ Facebook! Masallah, Hindi apki behad khubsurat hai!
@Divsi
I addressed ur concern with Rahul :-P
raj..read yr comment...n replied..its final i ll mail it on ya gmail account on sunday..u can think all ya way to dilli..;p
ohk...Thanx! Sure...Back to Dilli won't be boring!
:-)
@divsi....
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oops.. sorry for that "divish"..hehe..
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but i really dont mean that... it was just a mistake...lol
@raj...
n u.... i really like to comment when i found something good.... and this time i really find so...
hehe
Aapki rachna bahut hi utkrisht hai. :D
Loved the sarcastic tone. :)
Cheers
are yaar kya poem likhi hai kasam se,
bilkul dil ko chu gai yaar, main to tumhara fan ho gaya Bilkul,
tum kitab kyun nahi likhte ho yaar,
main tumhari pehli kitab kharidunga
bhai mere comment ka jawab jarur dena, mere ko mail karke..............
@ Bondgalz
Sarcasm is the undertone of this poem! Rightly said!
Dhanyavad, apke bahumulya tippani ke liye...
and Plz Update ur blog soon!
@ rahul
I am honored, Rahul! Ask Saurabh to change his profile name, from Rahul to Saurabh. I got confused!
Hehe...I am not that good a writer to write a book! I am still to learn the master-stroke of a writer and his Ink, which renders indelible imprint on our minds!
Thanx, nevertheless!
Keep Visiting!
rahul: its wokay yaar:))
rajeev: mail ka reply to karo..milli bhi hai ya nahi??:(
Rajeev,
Mail/2nd part agar pad liya to call karna, i am sure tumhe continue karne ke liye maine clues nahi chode....I mean i have hidden cetain things which you need to disclose it your part...
gimme a call sometime :)
Cheers
excellent
like it
I could follow a lil =)
Liked it.
Keep blogging! =)
that is the attitude of people..they consider themselves right...but i think thats necessary for one's happy living..the day when one person will start taking himself and his/her decisions wrong than it will be very difficult for him to live...
anyways..nice pem..good thoughts.
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